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Tsubasa Reservoir Chronicle, chapitre 157
Scans at [info]eldarianne's for now, [info]ladydarkmoon's ones should be out later.


Chapitre 157
Choice in the final moment

-01- (splash: clone and Shaoran)

Even though what I wanted to regain
was only one thing---

-02-

Fai: Yuui!
Yuui!

Yuui: A
a
a
a
ah!!!

-03-

Yuui: A
a
ah!

Fai: Yuui---!

-04-

Yuui: ... ly...
Yuui: ... orn...

Fai: Yuui!
Fai: Yuui-!

Yuui: ... Simply to have been born, is that a sin?

Yuui: Even though
we were simply born together as twins.
Even though all we did was to be born!
Fai: Yuui!

-05-

Yuui: Even going to a different country... will the same thing happen?

Yuui: Will people who have nothing to do with it...
die?

Fai: Yuui!

Yuui: Just because the two of us are together,
just because we're alive!

-06-

Yuui: Will everyone
die again,

Fai: ... hiccup
Yuui...

Yuui: just

-07-

Yuui: because we're alive?

-08-

Yuui: Is it a sin

-09-

Yuui: for us to simply be alive?

-11-

Fai: I'm sorry.
Fai: If I had died back then, Yuui would have been able to exist without this kind of thoughts.

Fai: I'm sorry.
Fai: I'm sorry.

-12-

Fai: I want to die, already.

Fai: If I die, Yuui will be able to leave this place.
Fai: Without being a twin, he'll be able to live on.

Fai: I want to die.
Fai: I want to die.
Fai: I want to die.
Fai: I want to die.
Fai: I want to die.

Fai: But, before that, someone,

-13-

Fai: someone...
Fai: I have to tell someone to help only Yuui.

Ashura-ou: You chose, didn't you?

-14-

Ashura-ou: Back then.

Fei Wang: Do you want to get out? From this place.

Yuui: ... Another... dream?

Fei Wang: It's not a dream.
Fei Wang: This is reality.

-15-

Yuui: That... shouldn't... happen.
Yuui: Nobody comes here...
except for corpses.

Fei Wang: That's the rule in this country.
Yuui: But... even in the neighbouring country, twins...
Fei Wang: That's the rule in this world...

Fei Wang: There are other worlds.

-16-

Fei Wang: This is a valley where magic isn't effective.
Fei Wang: However, my body is in a different dimension, a different world.
Therefore, it suffers no influence.

Fei Wang: Do you want to get out?
From this place.

Yuui: ......

-17-

Yuui: ... Yes.
If there are other worlds... I want to get out.
Yuui: And, someone... (T/N: Dangling object YAY! Personally, I have a strong feeling that he was going to say something along the lines of what Fai said.)

Fei Wang: Let's grant that wish.
However, it's only one person that can leave.

-18-

Fei Wang: Choose.
Fei Wang: You or the other person. (T/N: Fai is referred to as "mou hitori". "Mou hitori no <first-person-pronoun-of-choice>" is a common way to refer to one's twin... or clone.)

Yuui: Get Yuui out.

Teaser: The echoing screams and the mixed feelings. Next issue, the cruel conclusion!




I don't think I've ever stolen this many lines from past translations. XD

I'm pretty sure the one Fei Wang was talking to the whole time was Yuui, does anyone have a different opinion, and why?

Unless Yuui is way crazier than we thought and lost his sense of self, I'd say this is deliberate, calculated, and furthermore it's the reason why we readers "might not like Fai anymore after knowing his past".



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[info]su_chan
2007-06-20 10:27 am UTC (link)
YAAAAAAY! great as usual! thak you very much! Ihope we get the anwer next week!

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[info]ashura_sama
2007-06-20 10:41 am UTC (link)
You're welcome.

CLAMP better explain this one -thouroughly-. ^_^

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[info]kinoha
2007-06-20 11:02 am UTC (link)
Thank you!!! ^^

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[info]ashura_sama
2007-06-20 11:56 am UTC (link)
You're welcome! ^_^

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[info]caitsith16
2007-06-20 12:04 pm UTC (link)
Thank youuuuu

Mmm, I'm the only one who don't understand ANYTHING? DAMN CLAMP, EXPLAIN YOURSELVES SOME DAY. *confused*

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[info]ashura_sama
2007-06-20 12:27 pm UTC (link)
DAMN CLAMP, EXPLAIN YOURSELVES SOME DAY.
My feelings exactly, even though I do have some ideas of what could be happening. ^_^

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(Anonymous)
2007-06-20 12:22 pm UTC (link)
For the sake of argument, here's a post I made in my translation thread on MangaHelpers outlining my thoughts on who exactly Fei Wong Reed was talking to:

---
I'm aware that Yuui is at the bottom and Fai is at the top. But with the interesting artwork, I don't think it's 100% clear that the twin Fei Wong is speaking to is the one at the bottom - in either of the two chapters that depict the scene, especially this one. I can't deny that it looks rather like he's talking to the one at the bottom - the "camerawork" in the original flashback makes that almost certain, and the snow falling in both suggests that the encounter happens outside as well, but there are still so many things pointing to the twin Fei Wong is talking to being Fai that I can't decide properly.

The twin Fei Wong is talking to says a hanging "Dareka ni..." which is mirroring the "Dareka ni..." that Fai-in-the-tower was repeating earlier (which I translated as "tell someone", since it actually had context in that instance). [EDIT: Actually, on reflection, since the repetition here seems quite important, I'm changing my translation so that all instances of it read simply "someone". We now have three instances of the word "someone" in Fai's little speech in my translation, not including the one in the second part of the flashback. There were only two in the Japanese, but there need to be three in the translation or the repetition isn't as obvious.] Then there's the fact that he says "Get Yuui out of here" ("Yuui wo dashite"), which makes little sense if he is Yuui. And there's the fact that the flashback cuts out from past-Fai resolving to get Yuui out of there, to Ashura telling current-Fai that he chose back then, to the scene where the twin tells Fei Wong Reed his choice - clearly implying that all three are the same person.
---

After looking carefully at both chapters, I'm very hesitant to postulate that the twin Fei Wong Reed is talking to is actually in the tower - whilst the artwork is never 100% clear that the whole thing takes place at the bottom of the tower, it's pretty damn close. And that physical location is by far the biggest thing supporting the twin in that scene being Yuui - everything else points towards him being Fai. But physical location is in this instance something that's very difficult to ignore. The fact that the child at the bottom is repeating Fai's "dareka ni" can't very easily be explained away by saying that "Yuui thinks he is Fai" or "Yuui is being deliberate with his wording" like the fact that he used his own name - as far as I'm aware, Yuui wasn't even party to Fai's little rant to himself. So assuming the twin at the bottom is Yuui, either the echoing of Fai's words is a coincidence, or there's some kind of actual connection between the twins' consciousnesses going on here.

Of course, I could be reading too much into this and the "dareka ni" could just be something completely different, not intended to echo Fai's earlier words at all. But that seems a little unlikely to me.

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[info]ashura_sama
2007-06-20 01:02 pm UTC (link)
Then there's the fact that he says "Get Yuui out of here" ("Yuui wo dashite"), which makes little sense if he is Yuui.
Well, although I think children of royal heritage would be educated enough to use a real first-person pronoun, there's always the chance that these two aren't. I don't recall seeing them using first-person pronouns, so... There's also the other possibilities you mentioned later, of course.

And there's the fact that the flashback cuts out from past-Fai resolving to get Yuui out of there, to Ashura telling current-Fai that he chose back then, to the scene where the twin tells Fei Wong Reed his choice - clearly implying that all three are the same person.
Hmmm, the impression I had when I saw the scene cut was that "someone to help only Yuui" linked to Ashura-ou.

So assuming the twin at the bottom is Yuui, either the echoing of Fai's words is a coincidence, or there's some kind of actual connection between the twins' consciousnesses going on here.
I don't think it's a coincidence, though it wouldn't be impossible -- if the repetition had been of something more complex, yes, it'd completely exclude the possibility of a coincidence, but "dareka ni" isn't all that weird a segment in my opinion. I think it's more likely they both simply had the same idea -- to leave the other twin in someone's care -- because they love each other.

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(no subject) - [info]jjblue1, 2007-06-20 02:24 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]ashura_sama, 2007-06-20 02:37 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]jjblue1, 2007-06-20 02:43 pm UTC

[info]snowaltz
2007-06-20 12:26 pm UTC (link)
Thank you for the translation!

Now now, I'm more than curious why Fai ended up being the one who got out instead of Yuui.

And I'm kind of glad Fai is Fai and not Yuui. The Fai/real-Fai thing is repetitive from real/clone-Syaoran, haha.

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[info]ashura_sama
2007-06-20 12:40 pm UTC (link)
I'm not sure yet that our Fai is Fai. Things don't add up on either side. The, "Get Yuui out," line seems to go against our Fai being Yuui, but if our Fai is Fai, then where did Yuui fall from? Did Fei Wang, like, teleport-swap them, and then threw Yuui from the top of the tower? It doesn't make much sense to me.

Someone brought up this argument somewhere -- there's also the fact that the dead twin's fingers were clean. We know that Yuui's fingers were not, they were all bloody from trying to climb to the edge of the valley.

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(no subject) - [info]snowaltz, 2007-06-20 12:42 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]fizzyopolis, 2007-06-20 04:10 pm UTC
My theory - [info]sabinareborn, 2007-06-21 01:37 am UTC
Re: My theory - [info]kanon_chan, 2007-06-23 11:13 pm UTC
Re: My theory - [info]sabinareborn, 2007-06-24 01:08 am UTC
Re: My theory - [info]ashura_sama, 2007-06-24 08:11 am UTC

[info]morgif_kun
2007-06-20 12:43 pm UTC (link)
Clamp are playing with our minds DX

Looking at this chapter's images, I was under the impression that Yuui went crazy and just stopped moving/interacting with Fai after the emperor killed himself. He didn't seem able to hold that conversation with FWR.
On the other hand, if we assume a lot of time has passed (their hair's grown a lot longer), maybe part of the tower's ceiling has collapsed and Fai's laying in the snow too, so that he seems to be outside...

In short: I still believe Fai's made the decision but I'm not so sure anymore -_-;;


Btw, thank you for the translation ^_^

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[info]ashura_sama
2007-06-20 01:14 pm UTC (link)
You're welcome!

I'm still of the opinion that the identity of "Fai" is our Fai's first lie. The point where the floor meets the wall inside the tower shows very clearly that the inside of the tower has a small radius. Where the conversation takes place, there's no indication of a small radius. Besides, the passage of time is after pages 8-9, and after that we still have Fai practically snow-less and Yuui lying on the snow. And Yuui might have regained his ability to hold a conversation in the meantime. ^_^

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(no subject) - [info]morgif_kun, 2007-06-20 02:13 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]ashura_sama, 2007-06-20 02:57 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]morgif_kun, 2007-06-20 04:40 pm UTC

[info]ariadnechan
2007-06-20 01:26 pm UTC (link)
wow thanks for the super early translation i'm downloading so later i caoment you

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[info]ariadnechan
2007-06-20 02:08 pm UTC (link)
NOW I READ AND SEE THE CHAPTER OUR FAY IS YUUI i'm sorry for the mayors!!!
I think FWR spoke with both of them and Yuui chose himself becausee his will is broken, he has to see so much listen so much and read so much that he lose him self so he chose get out and Fay upthere chose to save Yuui because he felt guilty to live and put his brother in all of this!!!!!

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[info]ashura_sama
2007-06-20 02:51 pm UTC (link)
Poor Yuui... Maybe Fei Wang Reed talked to him because he was more "traumatizable"? You know, like "the higher you are, the worse the fall"? Fai was all depressed and wanting to die, but Yuui was more like determined and pissed off. Fei Wang couldn't break Fai because he was already broken, but to break Yuui would produce a devastating effect.

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(no subject) - [info]ariadnechan, 2007-06-20 06:26 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]sabinareborn, 2007-06-21 01:43 am UTC

[info]jjblue1
2007-06-20 02:19 pm UTC (link)
WOW!
I've read the spoilers but that's so much better!
Thank you for your translation! and... would you mind if I translate it in Italian?

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[info]ashura_sama
2007-06-20 02:42 pm UTC (link)
Thank you for your translation! and... would you mind if I translate it in Italian?
No problem at all, this time there aren't any unsolved issues, so it's okay! ^_^

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(no subject) - [info]jjblue1, 2007-06-20 02:44 pm UTC

[info]yuukosan
2007-06-20 02:22 pm UTC (link)
Thanks as usually!
I did not write a comment last weeks because of university exams...but now I'm here!

Oh, poor you! I can merely understand with the help of your translation. Twin characters' speech is terrible, isn't it? XD

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[info]ashura_sama
2007-06-20 02:39 pm UTC (link)
You're welcome!

CLAMP eats translators for breakfast, I swear. XD

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[info]karito_chan
2007-06-20 03:04 pm UTC (link)
O.o ...SIGO SIN ENTENDER NADA!!!! TT____TT (esas malditas CLAMP siempre hacen lo mismo) espero que para el siguiente capi quede todo mas clarO, me duele el cerebro de tanto pensar en esto...



THANKS FOR THE TRANSLATIONS!!!! ^__^

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[info]ashura_sama
2007-06-20 04:38 pm UTC (link)
You're welcome!

I don't think -anyone- quite understands what's going on. That's the evil of CLAMP for you. XD

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[info]itzeen
2007-06-20 04:40 pm UTC (link)
Thanks for the translations

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[info]ashura_sama
2007-06-20 05:46 pm UTC (link)
You're welcome!

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[info]shisanka
2007-06-20 05:01 pm UTC (link)
I don't know it kinda doesn't suit either of them to just choose themselves.
It's unlikely, but it's possible that on the last page it was Fai instead of Yuui.
After all in page 10 you can see that Fai was also surrounded by snow. O.o
Too many possibilities!
At the moment everyone could have said anything. @.@~~~
CLAMP are driving me crazy.

But you know even if our!Fai really did choose himself, I don't think we would stop liking him. Sure, it would be selfish, but he clearly neither wanted nor expected his twin to die.
Unless CLAMP pull another plot twist. X_X

Thank you very much!

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[info]ashura_sama
2007-06-20 05:46 pm UTC (link)
Unless CLAMP pull another plot twist. X_X
I don't doubt that even for one second. XD

If it was Fai on the last page, then he plain likes to feel guilty for everything he possibly can. I don't think the whole thing would haunt him in this way if all the blame had been Fei Wang's.

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(no subject) - [info]shisanka, 2007-06-20 06:05 pm UTC

[info]clamp_yuuko
2007-06-20 06:41 pm UTC (link)
So this means, Yuui knows that his power to make others unlucky only works in Valeria? Since FWR said that it was a rule in that country but there are other worlds?

So Yuui choose to save himself?

So sad ToT So that is why CLAMP said that perhaps we won't like Fai after all this... He is evil...

Thanks so much for your awesome translation!

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[info]ashura_sama
2007-06-20 09:12 pm UTC (link)
You're welcome!

Well, officially, it's not clear who is who yet (though my bets are still on Yuui having taken Fai's name). I very much want to see the explanation for the, "Get Yuui out." I know "Yuui" could just be a replacement for a proper pronoun, but I don't buy that.

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(no subject) - [info]clamp_yuuko, 2007-06-20 09:43 pm UTC

[info]refreshisama
2007-06-20 08:26 pm UTC (link)
Thank you!!!
So, at the end, our Fay was Yuui right?
Anyway, in ch. 133 we saw Fays flashback; How can Yuui know that past if he wasn't inside the tower?

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[info]ashura_sama
2007-06-20 09:16 pm UTC (link)
Something -messy- happened between those two. If we go by flashbacks, it seems like our Fai has the memories of both. They -are- twins, though, and this kind of thing happens between fictional twins sometimes.

I think our Fai is Yuui, but I'll stay in the "I think" land until further explanations. You never know when CLAMP will pull off a "they swapped bodies in the moment of Fai's death" thing. XD

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[info]herm_nefer
2007-06-20 10:52 pm UTC (link)
My brain is hurting me...CLAMP is confusing the mess out of me...though I was reading your comment to refreshisama andI have an idea...you said that Fai somehow has both Yuui and his own memories...CLAMP has done it before in a slightly different way with Chi and Freya. It was in a different way, but it was still a similar situation.

Thanks for the translation, I'll have to come back and reread the chapter when it's scanlated and then I'll be bale to make a better comment on it.

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[info]ashura_sama
2007-06-21 01:15 pm UTC (link)
You're welcome!

Hmmm, the Chi/Freya link... My TRC with extra angst, please! XD

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[info]truthseeker48
2007-06-21 04:38 am UTC (link)
So the cover....Is R!Syao getting taller or is that just me? He's leaning over but he's the same height as the clone...O.o; [/random]

LoL. Really making you work with these translations now xD
Thanks always for taking the time to do it~! ♥

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[info]ashura_sama
2007-06-21 01:17 pm UTC (link)
Sigh... I keep tuning out the images, don't I? About the only things I got from the cover were the bat symbols on the clone's clothes and the fact that Shaoran seems to have a predilection for keeping his right eye out of sight even when there's nothing wrong with it. XD

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[info]una_clover
2007-06-21 12:32 pm UTC (link)
Thanks very much :3

Everything is so confusing...

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[info]ashura_sama
2007-06-21 01:19 pm UTC (link)
You're welcome!

Dooon't worry, if it's confusing now, I'm sure it'll get even more confusing later. *evil laugh*

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(no subject) - [info]una_clover, 2007-06-21 03:15 pm UTC

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